ride in the grasslands against winds,
Wonder how long will it be,
I wonder in my wonderment,
to scale the face of all the land there is.
I want to glide above the rainbows,
fly in the highs against clouds,
Wonder how far will it be,
I wonder in my wonderment,
to penetrate the layers of all the sky there is.
I want to dive under the corals,
surf in the waves against currents,
Wonder how beneath will it be,
I wonder in my wonderment,
to reach the depths of all the ocean there is.
I want to know beside the facts,
discover in the world against people,
Wonder how much will it be,
I wonder in my wonderment,
to satisfy the thirst of all the mind there is.
I want to touch beyond the skin,
lose in the ecstasy against wills,
Wonder how hard will it be,
I wonder in my wonderment,
to transcend the love of all the flesh there is.
I wonder in my wonderment,
to wander in the wonderness of all the wonder there is.
1 comment:
the poem strikes me most significantly with its individuality. "I want" and "I wonder" repeatedly so powerfully declare the center of the action is the speaker and the declaration is so bold. I like that.
It strikes me as so much rooted in nature - the skies, waterbodies, flesh, desire and ambition. the thirst of the mind :) its very liberating.
wonderment is a slightly awkward word, and the last couplet just strikes as a tad gimmicky. but thats a very negligible little bit. I am very glad you wrote this. Its like a breath of a fresh air. Its very much needed every now and then. And the poem is terrific structurally speaking. I wish you would keep writing! All the best.
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